Too Many I’s

November 4th, 2008

Blogging is a big challenge for me. Most of the time my desire is to create something interesting for my few readers to enjoy. Some posts, such as embedded videos are used to make a point, or to pass on an interesting tidbit of information.

There are no illusions in my head however, that this blog will ever become “popular”. There just is not enough talent in my writing, or time to devote to realizing such an endeavor. What is the goal then? First, of course, the goal is to reach out to my fellow man, and specifically my fellow citizens with similars interests. Secondly, there is a great hope that these words will hold some value to my offspring when I part ways with this world.

Beyond those two ideas, the greatest desire I have, is to improve my writing skills. One thing that “I” constantly do, is use the pronoun “I” way to often. It is irritating, and is a crutch. In this endeavor to convey one’s experience, much of the story-telling is written in first person. This leads me to start every sentence with what I am doing, or what I think.

This link should be helpful in beating back this great impediment to my writing style. Our Creator has not blessed me with eloquence, so I have to learn to fake it.

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2 Comments

  1. theirritablearchitect

    So true of the dominant “I”.

    You’ve taken the first step at correcting it, by identifying the problem. A journey of self-direction and discovery is a great education.

    Don’t sell yourself short. Practice makes perfect.

    Enjoy.

  2. Ted

    I write to make myself laugh. If I’m lucky, I can also make the lovely and multifaceted Mrs. Borepatch laugh.

    Folks seem to be stopping by, too. This is very nice, but it’s gravy, not meat.

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